Dear Sirs / Madam,

    

        Pls be inform that xxxxxxxx language school provide ED visa from Thai Ministry to all people , espeicially from Africa, as Thai Ministry had permit to everybody to get ED visa from now on

 If you are interesting to get ED visa from our school pls feel free to contact us

 

 Best regards,

 

ZZZZZZZZ

Okay, I can understand if this was some informal communication but it's not.  It's a marketing pitch.  It should be very well written and with no mistakes.  

Also, what's the part about "especially from Africa"?  

BTW, this school also teaches English to Thais.  If this is an example of their results I would skip this school :-)