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Can anyone help me check if there's any grammar or spelling mistake?


sweetie0987

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The research aim to study foreigner’s opinion that lives in Thailand, in topic ‘Thai Dance Language for Foreigners’, in order to create an instructional media CAI , Including to apply the knowledge to use in watching Thai Dancing.

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The research aim to study foreigner’s opinion that lives in Thailand, in topic ‘Thai Dance Language for Foreigners’, in order to create an instructional media CAI , Including to apply the knowledge to use in watching Thai Dancing.

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The research aims to study the opinions of foreigners who live in Thailand regarding the topic, "Thai Dance Language for Foreigners" in order to create an instructional media CAI. The information learned in this can be applied while watching Thai dancing.

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You could also restructure it so the research is mentioned first........

In order to create an instructional media CAI, the research aims to study the opinions of foreigners who live in Thailand regarding the topic 'Thai Dance Language for Foreigners'. The information learned can be applied while watching Thai dancing.

If not previously mentioned CAI should be written in full and then abbreviated in brackets (CAI). Subsequent references can be abbreviated. I'm assuming CAI is an abbreviation of something ?

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