zeusbheld Posted September 7, 2007 Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 seems our dear joeska is not the only poet in our midst. thomas_k also reckons himself a poet. for me, his work pales in comparison to the great one. i find it creepy and trite. but as a great humanitarian, i must post it in case others will enjoy it: I've wrote down a saying perhaps a rhyme or 2On something we all think about, but only some of us do It starts when your young heck only a child You begin so subtle, thoughts only so mild Your 14 years old and sitting in class With nipples so hard they'd probably cut glass She simple walks by and with the quickest of touch Your head becomes empty, the blood starts to rush You raise your hand while peering round the room Pardon me teacher "May I be excused to the washroom" Why certainly young man of course you can leave Not knowing exactly what I had up my sleeve I ran down the hall with thoughts in my head Whispering softly....Mr P. .....YOUR SO DEAD!! Such a rushing of blood your left in a trance Thinking only of the party commencing in your pants Today il start slow then pick up the pace Or start with some power and end it with grace I whip down my pants, finally your set free Open your eye for the whole world to see A threesome a blonde a brunette doggy style My innocient visions have now become vile Clenching so hard my knuckles turn white Mr. P. gets it now ...he's in for a fight Working so hard sweat rolls down my cheek POlishing my shaft like an old piece of teaque OK Mr. P. there's something I must know When o when are you going to explode!! A suden sensation turns to incredible feeling As the monster erupts all over the ceiling A smile on my face and a sastified member THis is one of those days we will always remember I whip up my pants and do up my zip Being careful not to catch any of my tip As quick as I could I sped back to class Not wanting the teacher kicking my ass A job well done I just have to say Just an average moment in some of our days Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katoom Posted September 7, 2007 Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 I got as far as; With nipples so hard they'd probably cut glass Do I win a prize? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zeusbheld Posted September 7, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 I got as far as;With nipples so hard they'd probably cut glass Do I win a prize? for surviving that long, definitely... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas_K Posted September 7, 2007 Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 like i said in the original journal of this poem ....this was a poem written to a personal friend of mine as a request .......both the content and the subject are at the request of this friend.... hope that clears it up for you yet again zeus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevieJR Posted September 7, 2007 Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 Being Scottish......That kinda reminds me of Burns. 1st f**kin degree ones! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zeusbheld Posted September 7, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 like i said in the original journal of this poem ....this was a poem written to a personal friend of mine as a request .......both the content and the subject are at the request of this friend.... hope that clears it up for you yet again zeus ah you found it, after several attempts. i said nothing about the content, merely the quality (or lack of it)... and if i recall, this "personal friend" story wasn't what you said on the journal where you posted it, but sadly, i didnt save that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas_K Posted September 7, 2007 Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 like i said in the original journal of this poem ....this was a poem written to a personal friend of mine as a request .......both the content and the subject are at the request of this friend.... hope that clears it up for you yet again zeus ah you found it, after several attempts. i said nothing about the content, merely the quality (or lack of it)... and if i recall, this "personal friend" story wasn't what you said on the journal where you posted it, but sadly, i didnt save that. you seem to think i have to jusitfy anything to you ..... i didnt say anything in the journal ....i posted the poem i said before ill say again just so we are crystal clear this was for a personal friend ....weather you knew that or not doesnt concern me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katoom Posted September 7, 2007 Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 Being Scottish......That kinda reminds me of Burns.1st f**kin degree ones! Hahahahahahahahahaha! I was disparing of my "TGI Friday" journal from last week until that little ditti JR. It's been a slow painful day... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CiaranM Posted September 7, 2007 Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 like i said in the original journal of this poem ....this was a poem written to a personal friend of mine as a request .......both the content and the subject are at the request of this friend.... hope that clears it up for you yet again zeus kleenex anybody ???? btw ... u got some werid f**king friends ... they want u to try and write a poem about 14 year old boys jerking off !!!! :roll: :roll: :roll: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zeusbheld Posted September 7, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 like i said in the original journal of this poem ....this was a poem written to a personal friend of mine as a request .......both the content and the subject are at the request of this friend.... hope that clears it up for you yet again zeus ah you found it, after several attempts. i said nothing about the content, merely the quality (or lack of it)... and if i recall, this "personal friend" story wasn't what you said on the journal where you posted it, but sadly, i didnt save that. you seem to think i have to jusitfy anything to you ..... i didnt say anything in the journal ....i posted the poem i said before ill say again just so we are crystal clear this was for a personal friend ....weather you knew that or not doesnt concern me obviously, whether i *care* why you posted it doesn't concern you either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zeusbheld Posted September 7, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 Being Scottish......That kinda reminds me of Burns.1st f**kin degree ones! you, sirrah, have raised literary criticism to the level of fine art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas_K Posted September 7, 2007 Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 like i said in the original journal of this poem ....this was a poem written to a personal friend of mine as a request .......both the content and the subject are at the request of this friend.... hope that clears it up for you yet again zeus ah you found it, after several attempts. i said nothing about the content, merely the quality (or lack of it)... and if i recall, this "personal friend" story wasn't what you said on the journal where you posted it, but sadly, i didnt save that. you seem to think i have to jusitfy anything to you ..... i didnt say anything in the journal ....i posted the poem i said before ill say again just so we are crystal clear this was for a personal friend ....weather you knew that or not doesnt concern me obviously, whether i *care* why you posted it doesn't concern you either. you finally get it zeuz after all this time .... way to go !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zeusbheld Posted September 7, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 like i said in the original journal of this poem ....this was a poem written to a personal friend of mine as a request .......both the content and the subject are at the request of this friend.... hope that clears it up for you yet again zeus ah you found it, after several attempts. i said nothing about the content, merely the quality (or lack of it)... and if i recall, this "personal friend" story wasn't what you said on the journal where you posted it, but sadly, i didnt save that. you seem to think i have to jusitfy anything to you ..... i didnt say anything in the journal ....i posted the poem i said before ill say again just so we are crystal clear this was for a personal friend ....weather you knew that or not doesnt concern me obviously, whether i *care* why you posted it doesn't concern you either. you finally get it zeuz after all this time .... way to go !! yet, you don't seem to... keep up the work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zeusbheld Posted September 7, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 like i said in the original journal of this poem ....this was a poem written to a personal friend of mine as a request .......both the content and the subject are at the request of this friend.... hope that clears it up for you yet again zeus ah you found it, after several attempts. i said nothing about the content, merely the quality (or lack of it)... and if i recall, this "personal friend" story wasn't what you said on the journal where you posted it, but sadly, i didnt save that. you seem to think i have to jusitfy anything to you ..... i didnt say anything in the journal ....i posted the poem i said before ill say again just so we are crystal clear this was for a personal friend ....weather you knew that or not doesnt concern me ps, just so we are crystal clear, in your journal, you said it was about *you*. too bad i didn't save it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas_K Posted September 7, 2007 Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 like i said in the original journal of this poem ....this was a poem written to a personal friend of mine as a request .......both the content and the subject are at the request of this friend.... hope that clears it up for you yet again zeus ah you found it, after several attempts. i said nothing about the content, merely the quality (or lack of it)... and if i recall, this "personal friend" story wasn't what you said on the journal where you posted it, but sadly, i didnt save that. you seem to think i have to jusitfy anything to you ..... i didnt say anything in the journal ....i posted the poem i said before ill say again just so we are crystal clear this was for a personal friend ....weather you knew that or not doesnt concern me ps, just so we are crystal clear, in your journal, you said it was about *you*. too bad i didn't save it. sounds like a dodgy conspiracy theory to me ... keep trying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katoom Posted September 7, 2007 Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 btw ... u got some werid f**king friends ... they want u to try and write a poem about 14 year old boys jerking off !!!! :roll: :roll: :roll: So your actually owning up to having read the whole thing? :roll: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zeusbheld Posted September 7, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 sounds like a dodgy conspiracy theory to me ... keep trying your literary merits speak for themselves... keep trying.... and maybe you can blurse us with some new works? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slurms Posted September 7, 2007 Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 Hauntingly beautiful , like phonic cunningingus of the ear.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zeusbheld Posted September 7, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 Hauntingly beautiful , like phonic cunningingus of the ear.... indeed. i pity the fools who think of TF as a dating site, and don't realize it's a cutting-edge literary journal... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beej Posted September 7, 2007 Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 HAHAHHAHAHAHHAAAAAAAAAA HAHAHAHAHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA Poet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robbie36 Posted September 7, 2007 Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 like i said in the original journal of this poem ....this was a poem written to a personal friend of mine as a request .......both the content and the subject are at the request of this friend.... hope that clears it up for you yet again zeus So why publish it on the internet? And expose yourself to such ridicule. But dont worry it will only be read by 2 billion people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katoom Posted September 7, 2007 Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 But dont worry it will only be read by 2 billion people. Thats a joke right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sunsnow Posted September 7, 2007 Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 And what is your point with all this ZBH? When this thread goes to personal insults, which are not supposed to be condoned in the forums, you will lock it as a moderator? Or what? Seems weird to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beej Posted September 7, 2007 Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 But dont worry it will only be read by 2 billion people. Thats a joke right? Miss Teen Kansas didn't think her crap speech about maps would get broadcast to billions of people but it did! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tattoodude Posted September 7, 2007 Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 like i said in the original journal of this poem ....this was a poem written to a personal friend of mine as a request .......both the content and the subject are at the request of this friend.... hope that clears it up for you yet again zeus My friend asked me to tattoo a penis on his forehead. I didn't do it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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